Efeito do feedback por meio de screencasting na escrita de um ensaio discursivo
Resumo
O objetivo geral desta pesquisa foi avaliar o impacto do feedback fornecido por meio de screencasting em ensaios discursivos escritos. Três dimensões foram avaliadas: organização e estrutura, cumprimento da tarefa e domínio do idioma.
A amostra foi composta por 18 estudantes do 7.º ano de uma escola particular em Concepción, Chile. O estudo seguiu um delineamento pré-experimental, aplicando um pré-teste e um pós-teste com um grupo intacto (não randomizado). Em ambos os testes, o instrumento utilizado correspondeu à seção de escrita do exame internacional Trinity.
Na intervenção, o grupo participou de um tratamento de três semanas, que consistiu na redação individual de três ensaios discursivos em formato on-line. O feedback foi fornecido por meio da ferramenta screencast.
A análise dos resultados do pré-teste e do pós-teste mostrou diferenças significativas no desempenho dos ensaios discursivos nas três dimensões avaliadas: organização e estrutura, cumprimento da tarefa e domínio do idioma. Esses resultados confirmam a hipótese do estudo: a provisão de feedback por meio de screencasting tem um impacto positivo na escrita de ensaios discursivos. Em relação ao questionário, a maioria dos estudantes demonstrou percepção positiva sobre o feedback recebido via screencast.
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